Come on…. Quickly they are gaining on us. Copper slipped. He hit his head with an almighty thud. “Help” screamed as the man grabbed his arm. Sargent Bob was a nice man yet Copper and his friends hated his existence. Copper felt Sargent Bob was a strange and scary man and was unsure of his motive. The Sargent walked up to Copper and softly said “I am so sorry for scaring you, I was just having some fun! Copper quickly turned and ran. Bob looked on in sorrow and surprise.
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Sycamore Class- A year 6 Class Blog 
You’ve managed to squeeze quite a few twists and turns into your story Josh and also conveyed what appear to be quite complex relationships between the charcters … not bad for 100 words! You’ve used a good range of vocabulary to do this which adds richness, depth and detail. Well done.